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炎炎夏日也阻挡不了我去东方明珠的快乐心情。来到塔底,我看到了塔由直径9米擎天立柱、太空舱、球体和塔身组成,真雄伟啊! 于是我迫不及待地登上了透明观光电梯,一会儿就到了顶层351米,我跟爸爸不约而同走向有机玻璃档板朝下看,我克服了紧张,小心翼翼地踩上去,俯视上海全貌,哇!真是壮观!那一栋栋高楼像码头上的一个个集装箱;黄浦江上的一艘艘万吨大轮船像一块块橡皮;地面的一辆辆汽车像一只只小蚂蚁在爬行;看到的一个个人小的不能再小了……真是有趣极了。 啊!可爱的东方之珠,我爱你!

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本文重点写了小作者跟随爸爸去东方明珠观看的情景,可以说描写生动,文章结构也比较完整,尤其在写作者俯看上海全貌的时候,运用了比喻的修辞手法,更让我们感受到东方明珠的高,但感觉题目和文章不太匹配,是否可换个更合适的题目。

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